I don't know if this is the forum for this but I started this work yesterday and wondered if anyone here would listen and tell me if they feel it is a finished composition, or if it feels like it needs more? I ask because I often get to close to my material and it is awfully hard to see the forest for all the trees.
Please feel free to offer criticism or suggestions... I find that often the music pours out and I can't stop the process.
Eternal Darkness version 1
This is going to be part of an Orchestral Suite containing a collection of different mood paintings.
After meeting with my mentor, he has suggested some changes. He has asked me to 'flesh out' the work a bit - his words. So, here is the newer version after taking some of is suggestions and working them into the piece. I include both here in case anyone would like to compare the two versions. A kind of: Before and After.
Eternal Darkness version 2
Thanks in advance,