Dream-G major

This music describes me a great view with trees, sky and sea. Like being in a dream. I tried not to write this piece and it sounds like. Only four chords. But, the work is very exciting for me And I'd like to get opinions:)

 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N_5TTpisf44

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  • You are using one simple theme, repeated, enriching the orchestration and simplifying again towards the end;

    3'18" is too long;

    IMO if you slide pictures then fine, it is unobstrusive ...

    otherwise one feels the lack of some resolution, change of keys, perhaps of a counterpoint melody ...

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