one source of inspiration for me is C Debussy. I sympathize with his approach to music as purely emotional and his refuse to follow any rules and structures.
This piece is rather long but second half is a variation of the first half so comments on first half is also appreciated.
Maybe the intro is to rough. The purpose of this lively part is to form a brutal contrast to what follows, the calm and harmonic section. It would be interesting to hear what you think of this particular idea.
I chose a German title since I think this expression sings by itself and I had la Mer in mind when composing.