Cinematic action track by me

[SOHAN]

hey there, i'm new here...would be happy if you guys listen one of my track & leave comment...it'll help me to improve my composition & mixing skills.

https://soundcloud.com/gr-sohan/fear-victory-by-sohan

[Timothy Smith]

Welcome SOHAN!

I listened to this and think it's almost ready for a movie. The only thing I could find that seemed just a bit off to me was thestring stabs seem to be missing some space. If  it were real strings were playing you would have some kind of a delay from the sound hitting surrounding surfaces. For this reason I'm saying the strings sound a bit sterile. Maybe add just a slight amount of reverb or delay to make them sound like they are real. Everything else is fantastic to my ears! Nice work.

[Gavin Brown]

Hi Sohan,

This sounds like Conan to me! (not the late night host, the barbarian). A solid track -

Thanks for letting us have a listen,

Gav

[Kjell Prytz]

Hi SOHAN,

thanks for giving us a taste of your music. I think you have good control of your tools and produces here a very impressive piece of music which probably will be developed into something masterly.

Thanks

Kjell

[SOHAN]

this is why i'm here...i need some friends who will give me suggestions & tips...i think i found at last :D
thanks a lot ! 

Timothy Smith said:

Welcome SOHAN!

I listened to this and think it's almost ready for a movie. The only thing I could find that seemed just a bit off to me was thestring stabs seem to be missing some space. If  it were real strings were playing you would have some kind of a delay from the sound hitting surrounding surfaces. For this reason I'm saying the strings sound a bit sterile. Maybe add just a slight amount of reverb or delay to make them sound like they are real. Everything else is fantastic to my ears! Nice work.

[SOHAN]

thanks :)

Kjell Prytz said:

Hi SOHAN,

thanks for giving us a taste of your music. I think you have good control of your tools and produces here a very impressive piece of music which probably will be developed into something masterly.

Thanks

Kjell

[SOHAN]

thanks :)
Gav Brown said:

Hi Sohan,

This sounds like Conan to me! (not the late night host, the barbarian). A solid track -

Thanks for letting us have a listen,

Gav