Arctic Petals (Original Piano Composition)

[Randy Kim]

This was a piece where I was forced to use only vi-IV-I-V (and the music had to be around 2:20 or less). Since this is my best romantic-impressionistic work so far, I would like some criticism to see what I can improve on.

Arctic Petals (Score + Audio)

[Gavin Brown]

Hi Randy,

Lovely and affecting, very well done. You took a traditional chord pattern and put a fresh take on it -

Thanks for sharing,

Gav

[Islam Y.Omari]

It is very beautiful, I love it. Well done. I can not wait to hear more of this. Spectacular in every sense. You took that vi-IV-I-V progression to a completely next level. Bravo Bravo Bravo Randy. Your build ups are very catchy, the use of dynamics and everything, and I loved how your build ups end with some kind of an explosion and then the explosion collects itself some how to rebuild the connectivity and hold the theme together. I salute you. You are very talented. More plz of this :)

[Randy Kim]

Thank you; I'm glad you enjoy this piece :)

Gav Brown said:

Hi Randy,

Lovely and affecting, very well done. You took a traditional chord pattern and put a fresh take on it -

Thanks for sharing,

Gav

[Randy Kim]

Thank you; I'm glad to see that you enjoy this composition! Maybe one day I'll post more compositions on this site for feedback. On my profile should contain a link to my Musescore account, which contains all of my compositions starting from over two years ago ;)

Islam Y.Omari said:

It is very beautiful, I love it. Well done. I can not wait to hear more of this. Spectacular in every sense. You took that vi-IV-I-V progression to a completely next level. Bravo Bravo Bravo Randy. Your build ups are very catchy, the use of dynamics and everything, and I loved how your build ups end with some kind of an explosion and then the explosion collects itself some how to rebuild the connectivity and hold the theme together. I salute you. You are very talented. More plz of this :)