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Feedback appreciated, open to revising the score
Hello. New to this space and I joined to see if this could be a potential place to put my pieces up for criticism. These pieces will be intended to be sold and used professionally. I'm planning on releasing an album designed to be utilized by video g
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Fugue in E minor
This fugue breaks so many conventions, I don't even know how to describe it. For sure, if you're expecting a Bachian fugue, be prepared to be disappointed. :D A tonally-ambiguous subject, answers coming in a 6th below instead of a 5th, unconvention
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Fugue for Brass Band
Hello. I wrote this fugue a couple months ago and it was performed by a leading New Zealand brass band. I didn't get to hear the performance, and I wasn't very proactive towards getting feedback, so I thought I'd post it on a public forum for some cr
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Let me rock'n roll
Hi,
This is a small test. I tried to write something for a rockn roll band.
I know there are experts in this area here in Composer's Forum.
I appreciate any comments.
Lyrics:
Dont do this
Dont do that
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Short bit of computer-generated music.
I've written a program which generates short musical patterns. I'd be interested to know what you think, and what I could add to this structure.
Computer-Generated Music - example 1.mid
Computer-Generated Music - example 1.pdf
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Tulip for piano, rock drums, and small orchestra
As I continue to experiment with writing orchestrally, drums is always the hardest part, mostly because writing for percussion is new to me. The hardest thing is not to yield to the temptation to cut and paste a repeated rhythm too much, which I see
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Latinx Waltz in G Minor
Hi All,
I wanted to share what I have so far and see what you think. I like the way it is sounding so far. I know i have to improve the recording quality and my guitar playing a bit. It has been nice for me to see how composing is making me a better
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Klezmer-inspired
I'm not sure where to go with this piece or, for that matter, whether its even entirely original (I struggle with that often) but I would love to hear any comments/feedback.
Thank you!
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piece for piano and orchestra
I got inspired listening to a Schubert piece in F# minor and started working on this. I'm not sure what mode it is but the chord progression F#m, Bm, Db, F#m doesn't fit in the standard scheme. Anyway, I'd love to hear what you all think of it so far
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Guitar Piece
Hi All,
I wanted to know what you think of this guitar piece? I like how it sounds so far, I think I just need to make some choices about how long I want each part, and how long each part should be. I also will be adding a melody to go on top of thes
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a short tiptoe through the snow
I know pieces like this are simple and childlike, but for me it's good practice at exploring small combinations of instruments and basic concepts/techniques.
I thought this one would be fun to share.
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Voyager I Leaving The Heliosphere (Flute and Piano) - Feedback Please
I've decided to do something completely different than my normal thing. I've never enjoyed 12-tone serialism, but I decided to give it a little try. I don't follow the rules entirely, because I wanted to create something that uses it, but still sound
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A lockdown son
Hello everybody,
this coronavirus lockdown (fortunately it was not hard in Rome, where I live) allowed me to have a lot of time to compose, therefore I used it. The output is a symphonic poem called "The World and Man".
I don't believe in God, but i
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Vivaswan - New here - A Question
Hello! I am new to the forum. Is there any thing should I know, if at all? And I guess am not suppose to post music here right? May be am just a little confused. VIVASWAN
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A theme with no name
I have just finished this piece and wanted to share it with you guys/gals for feedback.
Before I started writing this piece I was thinking hard about the theme and emotions for the piece.
I have no idea what theme I actually went with at the end but t
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Piano Composition in E minor
This is one of the first pieces that I actually composed on the piano (instead of mostly in the software). In fact, I even notated it by hand before putting it into the computer. I tried to notate how I play it, though the timing of the live performa
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Full Orchestra Rondo
This piece was really fun to write. I was trying to learn about orchestration, so I wanted to put together a chord for a full orchestra. Everything after that was just kept adding notes on instinct. Somewhere around measure 7 or 8 I decided it should
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Orchestral - Questions about doubling
Hello Colleagues,
In the last couple of years or so, I've been writing for small classical ensembles (string quartets, wind quintets and the like) to familiarize myself with how they work. I'm also working on an orchestral score based on things I've
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