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Finished this short last month. Unfortunately I had only 2 days to do the whole thing, so not everything is where I would like it. But still pretty fun. The film is written, directed and lead actor is Victoria Goring and her daughter.

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Comment by Andrew Gleibman on August 24, 2010 at 12:44am
Weber's Sonata No.3 has a very strong tragic contrast similar to this film:

http://www.musopen.com/sheetmusic.php?type=sheet&id=1989

Compare Allegro Feroce (page 63) with dolce tranquillo (page 65) and then feroce again (page 68)
Comment by Chris Alpiar on August 23, 2010 at 5:23pm
Thanks for your thoughts Andrew, I will take it all in and make some changes.
Comment by Andrew Gleibman on August 23, 2010 at 3:22pm
Interesting piece. Trying to provide some critique. As the video sequence has repeated motives with different mood, so should be the music. In other words, the repeated fragments of music need additional colors. In some places the melody would win if played an octave up or by a different instrument. For example, in the light part, starting from 4:16, I would apply either another instrument or rise the melody by an octave. Maybe the bass can be modified too, e.g. played by string pizzicato or even by light piano staccatos. In 5:50 (the concluding part) the melody would be better played by a flute. Current instrument, playing the melody, is slightly overused. I would also add a couple of fermatas or ritenutos where strong actor gestures are applied.
Comment by Chris Alpiar on August 23, 2010 at 1:48pm
obviously this is my mix, the final has the music more subdued lol

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