"Hi Rick,
the harmony did a great job supporting the melody with using the right chords as Gav said, good job with composing the harmony, however, i think the lead instrument selection limited the sensation of the melody yet the capability of…"
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"Modesty" an original piano piece
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Hey everyone, I had this for a while but this is actually the first time I post it here, I would like to hear what you guys think about it, I also would love to hear what you guys think that was…Continue
Change "An Original Tune"
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Hello everyone, I would like to share with you my latest piano tune "Change"; An eastern taste that dives right into a western flavor. I would really love to hear your feedback and any room for…Continue
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"wow, thank you so much, I am very happy to hear that :D"
"Romantic tune, post-modern in its form in the sense that you let your feeling flow. It gives me an interesting impression and surprising feelings. Well done, Omari.
Kjell"
"Thank you so much Dane for your input, very helpful :)"
"Oh thank you so much Michael, having different opinions is really encouraging for me, that means that some audience connected to it and some did not, which is pretty normal in the world of music, (still this is way encouraging than having everyone…"
"oh thank you, so basically, you I think did connect to the tremolo part, 45-3:20 is actually repetitive in its nature, so that I let the audience understand the melody parts and more like anticipate them, I see what you are talking about Gav, may be…"
"As it happens I did replay it late last night.
The only thing that grated was the occasional octave vibrato but that's a matter or style that others may be ok with. The rest was soothing. "
"It does have a touch of the classical vein, as you say, Mr. Omari. I enjoyed it, it was impeccably played, and I am always impressed by that. By the way, that was a real piano, was it not? Some of the black keys looked a bit worn, like they were…"
"Sure Islam, it begins around :45 and continues on through the end of the piece. I found by around 3:20 I was starting to fade, perhaps if you simply started increasing the volume around then it would have given me a feeling of building towards an…"
"Many thanks Dane for the feedback, very informative, I'd love to hear you inputs about this, does it make you wanna hit the replay button? and if the answer is no, what suggestions you might have that would do the replay? "
"Well, many thanks for the feedback Gav.. Well, I have never had a specific genre of music that I always listen to, I am not actually biased to any kind of music, but when it comes to composing, I feel that the pop vein is more what the majority of…"
"I found it pleasant if perhaps a little long. In this I agree with Gav. If my intention were to sit and listen intently - say, if it was performed at a salon-type session, I think my attention would wander - but as incidental music, if I were…"
"Hi Islam,
This has some pleasing things about it, and also some things which I felt could use some consideration. On the pleasing side, it is a pretty tune in a pop vein. On the other side, it feels a little disjointed - the opening part with the…"
"Modesty" an original piano piece
Hey everyone, I had this for a while but this is actually the first time I post it here, I would like to hear what you guys think about it, I also would love to hear what you guys think that was strong and what was weak about it, all of your feedback is highly appreciated, any thoughts? suggestions? :) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mj_NAm8S0BISee More
"I totally agree with michael, I second what he said, I think this has integrity, I think it is boring in a good sense, not that kind of sense that urge you to stop listening to the piece, all it needs is some thoughtful elaboration as michael said,…"
"Hi Dane,
Very interesting build ups that always leave the listener unsatisfied, more like the ear is kind of looking for a sense of relieve and never finds it, I think they call this a deceptive Cadence in music, you were not referring much to the…"
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- What have you composed for? Or what medium do you work around?
- Other
- What is your favorite genre or style of music?
- pop, rock, oriental, jazz, blues, funk, classic..etc; no specific genre; any piece of music I connect to
- Is music your main income source?
- No - Not at all.
- Where do you live?
- Jordan
- About Me (Must include at least one paragraph of biographical information about you as a composer) - blank or minimal answers on this line will cause your request to be rejected. Include a link to your website if you have one.
- My name is Islam Omari. I have been playing the piano for almost 10 years now on and off. Although my education is architecture, however, I have been passionate about music ever since I was a little kid. I like to compose music, sing and play the piano (my main instrument). I have been always looking for an interactive platform where I can share my composed music, listen to peers' composed music, receive feedback, evaluate myself and eventually, build my progress. I really hope that you like the music that I compose and I would really like if you share with me your thoughts, ideas and rooms for improvements.
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Islam Omari
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- At 9:13pm on March 15, 2019,
Gav Brown said…
Welcome Islam!
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