"Sounds nice, although you might want to reach outside the "norm" a bit. Challenge yourself. Ask yourself it the music has a familiar sound and if so, experiment with ways of spicing it up. Also, you don't have to play it well (unless…"
Don't you just hate it when you've got a new piece that you really love and it's a bit beyond your playing capabilities, but you still want to share it? That's what I heard with your piece. Overall I think you've…"