"Hi, mr Porter.
Thank you for reply. I think, the main problem wasn't fast writing, but that I wrote it without video. It seems like soundtrack, but without movie it isn't. So - no video - no knowledge about what is happening and how it…"
"I think it is mostly fine like it is. The first half is the sting statement. When it is done, something else has to happen. So you add drums. Great. Then the same string statement returns. That's OK, too. As a mood piece it's good enough.…"
"With respect, and I mean that, it does sound like you made it in one day. It sounds like you played a string "pad" chord progression with your best sounding string library, inserted a drum groove (maybe already prerecorded?) Then added…"