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Unrequited/Unrequired

Started this discussion. Last reply by Daniel Krausz Sep 11. 9 Replies

A little piece I’m working on. I’ll really appreciate all thoughts and feedback.Thanks.Continue

 

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Daniel Krausz replied to Jim Onyemenam's discussion Unrequited/Unrequired
"Very nice melody! I would add some variance to the tempo map and play with the note velocities a bit. It’s a bit too mechanical as it is now IMO. You night want to add a bit more reverb as well. As others have stated, the left hand needs some…"
Sep 11
Gav Brown replied to Jim Onyemenam's discussion Unrequited/Unrequired
"Hi Jim, This has a pleasant sound! I think the only thing which struck me as being off is that the ending doesn’t strike me as an ending so much - it feels like you just stop playing. I would suggest adding some kind of final cadence, or if…"
Aug 26
Ingo Lee replied to Jim Onyemenam's discussion Unrequited/Unrequired
"I like this, you set a nice typical accompaniment pattern with a sweet melody, very well done but I think at measure 32 you have an opportunity to follow that opening with some development that would be very welcome.  After exploiting those…"
Aug 21
Jim Onyemenam replied to H. S. Teoh's discussion Prelude in E-flat major
"Really liked this a lot! The big block chords are so proclamative and strong, like a big march. Personally, I would have loved a deconstruction within, exploring what lies in the piece beyond it’s big-ness. Would also allow for more melodic…"
Aug 18
Jim Onyemenam replied to Jim Onyemenam's discussion Unrequited/Unrequired
"Thanks Gav. Thanks so much Bob. Yh definitely considering some variations and further developments for the left hand."
Aug 17
Gav Brown replied to Jim Onyemenam's discussion Unrequited/Unrequired
"Thanks Jim, will be in touch - Gav"
Aug 17
Bob Morabito replied to Jim Onyemenam's discussion Unrequited/Unrequired
"I enjoyed this, and I feel this music conveys the mood of "unrequited" very well, but for myself Id really like to see a few small changes in the left hand. The melody part gets developed, but the left hand seems to remain the same…"
Aug 16
Jim Onyemenam replied to Jim Onyemenam's discussion Unrequited/Unrequired
"Thanks Bob. Gav, I’ve attached the score below. Thanks."
Aug 15
Jim Onyemenam replied to Jim Onyemenam's discussion Unrequited/Unrequired
"Thanks Bob. Gav, I’ve attached the score below. Thanks."
Aug 15
Jim Onyemenam replied to Jim Onyemenam's discussion Unrequited/Unrequired
"Thanks Bob. Gav, I’ve attached the score below. Thanks."
Aug 15
Gav Brown replied to Jim Onyemenam's discussion Unrequited/Unrequired
"Hi Jim, Do you have a score you can share with us? Gav"
Aug 15
Bob Porter replied to Jim Onyemenam's discussion Unrequited/Unrequired
"Jim, I'm not a big piano fan. What would really make this piece for me would be to fade some strings in before the melody comes in. Plus not leaving the melody up so high all the time. I believe these two things would help enhance the…"
Aug 15
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Unrequited/Unrequired

A little piece I’m working on. I’ll really appreciate all thoughts and feedback.Thanks.See More
Aug 15
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"Welcome Jim!"
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What have you composed for? Or what medium do you work around?
Film, Television, Small Ensemble, Songs
What is your favorite genre or style of music?
Neoclassical/Jazz
Is music your main income source?
No - Not at all.
Where do you live?
UK
About Me (Must include at least one paragraph of biographical information about you as a composer) - blank or minimal answers on this line will cause your request to be rejected. Include a link to your website if you have one.
Amateur composer exploring musical expressionism, inspired by Clint Mansell, Brahms, Max Richter, Dustin O'Hollaran, Hans Zimmer, and Richard Clayderman amongst others.

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At 8:16am on August 15, 2018, Gav Brown said…

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