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Spirits - new composition
Started this discussion. Last reply by Daniel Moretti Sep 9, 2015. 5 Replies 1 Like
Hi there, I thought about composing a piece based on only 2 themes. I'm still figuring out some things to change as well ass making the virtual performance more realistic with (still working on…Continue
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A song for my bird (2 pianos )- Feedback please.
Started this discussion. Last reply by H. S. Teoh Apr 17, 2015. 10 Replies 2 Likes
Hello, this is a piece I composed for 2 pianos (+ Contrabass, optional). It's dedicated to my budgie who died this year in February. I would really appreciate any feedback you can give, it means a…Continue
First Composition for Symphony Orchestra - Frozen Hearts
Started this discussion. Last reply by Tim Marko Jan 22, 2015. 10 Replies 0 Likes
I tried something new in the past few weeks..;a composition for Symphony Orchestra (my first composition ever for orchestra).I would enjoy if you could give me some feedback (positive/negative)Thanks…Continue
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Started this discussion. Last reply by Olmnilnlolm Jan 13, 2015. 6 Replies 0 Likes
Hi there, I have a question….I'm searching a piece for 2 trombones + wind orchestra because I'll play a solo with a friend and we have to find a piece that we want to play.So, I was wondering if…Continue
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Daniel Moretti replied to Daniel Moretti's discussion Spirits - new composition"Hello, sorry I had no time to reply.....I really appreciate your feedback and your advice !
@Paul Halley: I'll try to use your chords in the choral ! Thank you
@H.S. Teoh: Yes I have a score, I'll upload it. yeah the piece isn't…"
H. S. Teoh replied to Daniel Moretti's discussion Spirits - new composition"You have some pretty nice things going on... though if you have a score it would help in giving more specific feedback. I liked the way the 2nd theme comes in with full grandeur. Very good contrast with the lightly-scored 1st theme.
It sounded…"
Paul Halley replied to Daniel Moretti's discussion Spirits - new composition"Impressive piece Daniel. Both themes are great and very well contrasted. Its very exciting to listen to - a very effective piece. The only suggestion I have is to extend the ending a bit more. Draw it out and expand the big chordal theme more to…"
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Hi there, I thought about composing a piece based on only 2 themes. I'm still figuring out some things to change as well ass making the virtual performance more realistic with (still working on it).But for now I'd like to be given some feedback and why not also some tips.Thank you, Daniel M.See More
H. S. Teoh replied to Daniel Moretti's discussion A song for my bird (2 pianos )- Feedback please."Glad I could help!"
Daniel Moretti replied to Daniel Moretti's discussion A song for my bird (2 pianos )- Feedback please."I listened to your changes and I like that very much ! I'll see if I can develop those chords throughout the piece...
Thank you for your invested time !"
H. S. Teoh replied to Daniel Moretti's discussion A song for my bird (2 pianos )- Feedback please."OK, so I inputted mm.42-48 from your score and played around with it a little, and here's what I came up with. See the attached pdf.
The first page is taken from your original, the second page shows variant A where I replaced the chord in…"
Daniel Moretti replied to Daniel Moretti's discussion A song for my bird (2 pianos )- Feedback please."Thank you very much ! I'll have a look at the chords tomorrow and I'll tell you what I think. I may don't have the needed experience of composing since I'm only 17 haha, so this will certainly help a lot !"
H. S. Teoh replied to Daniel Moretti's discussion A song for my bird (2 pianos )- Feedback please."Listened to it again this morning. Having the score helped a lot in picking out some of the melody lines which got obscured by the poor midi rendering. Anyway...
I thought at m.21 you could use a sus4 chord so that the pause doesn't sound too…"
Daniel Moretti replied to Daniel Moretti's discussion A song for my bird (2 pianos )- Feedback please."Ok, yes I would really appreciate if you could have a look at it, thank you again !"
H. S. Teoh replied to Daniel Moretti's discussion A song for my bird (2 pianos )- Feedback please."P.S. Just noticed that you originally scored this for string section / string quintet. I'm wondering if it might be more effective in this medium than on two pianos. Perhaps you might want to consider importing this original scoring into your…"
H. S. Teoh replied to Daniel Moretti's discussion A song for my bird (2 pianos )- Feedback please."I'm at work now, so I'll have to listen to your piece again later, following along the lead sheet.
I had guessed that the "out-of-place" chord may have been intentional. I totally understand the intent behind that. I'll have…"
Daniel Moretti replied to Daniel Moretti's discussion A song for my bird (2 pianos )- Feedback please."Hello, thank you very much for these kind words and your feedback. Yes, I'll post the score too.
First of, yes the playback isn't exactly played as I had in mind the interpretation. I originally wrote it for String ensemble, so it…"
H. S. Teoh replied to Daniel Moretti's discussion A song for my bird (2 pianos )- Feedback please."Could you also post the score? It would help greatly in giving you more specific feedback.
My condolences on your budgie... hope you are coping well. "Mila"... what a beautiful name for a budgie!
The music itself sounds quite intense and…"
Daniel Moretti posted a discussionA song for my bird (2 pianos )- Feedback please.
Hello, this is a piece I composed for 2 pianos (+ Contrabass, optional). It's dedicated to my budgie who died this year in February. I would really appreciate any feedback you can give, it means a lot to me, thank you !https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=04ZYDX_FEtAI wrote this in Logic Pro X 10.1.1 and used "Steinway Stage Piano", using the default sound library.See More
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I already earned professional orchestral experience by playing with the Luxembourg Philharmonic Orchestra, the Luwembourg Chamber Orchestra and the Military Band of Luxembourg.
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