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UPDATE: Hi everyone, I'd just like to update and announce that I have won 1 of the 3 places in the Young Composers Challenge orchestral division! I will receive 1000$, along with a professional live recording of my piece in Orlando where I will be attending a rehearsal of it etc.!I am very excited and I owe a great deal of my success to the input I have received here. Thanks guys! (My name is Dan…