Share 'Any Feedback for Film Music'

Hello there Composers! So I wrote some music and for this scene of Saving Private Ryan.  Just to get some practice in I guess.  Would you be so kind as to listen and offer any feedback?  I am all for constructive criticism or even encouragement.  The Link is Below.  Thanks Guys! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=73PTnqOi36Q&feature=mfu_in_order&list=UL