Share 'An old softy I've been reluctant to post, but hey why not.'

I wrote and produced this piece a couple of years ago, long before I had purchased East West Symphonic Orchestra and other decent tools. I've been in two minds as to whether to post it here, but since I'm considering re-doing with the better quality tools I now have, perhaps it's a good time to hear some critique on the original.   Anyway, here it is.