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Sorry, but I must say it isn´t a good piece. For a contemporary composition it is much too conservativ, for a traditional style are too much mistakes in it, in this style exist many, many very good compositions from old masters, we don´t need the minor good examples. We need good new and originally ideas about music for services and for church amateur choirs. Try to write liturgical pieces with this idea.
Sorry but I can not say anything encouraging. (... and sorry for my bad english).
Thanks!! I do find it hard to get an idea. Did you have a specific style in mind? Do you have some sound samples on your computer?