Zemfaza

[Mark Grand]

I am interested in some feedback on my latest composition I call Zemfaza.  I call it Zemfaza because if you say "Zemfaza" four times fast, it sounds like the opening theme.

Zemfaza%20with%20Trumpet.mp3

[Sandy Herrault]

For my tastes, it pleasingly melodic.  That's what I find most interesting.  The minimalist approach is nice, but then it seems it needs more body after about 1/2 the way through.  More countermelody, etc...

[Luke Salamone]

I think it depends which way you want to go with this, but I would add some percussion to drive the piece forward.  A snare would be nice.

[Mark Grand]

Interesting idea.  I included the piano to provide a percussive element, but there may be parts that could use more.