Waves; A new piano original piece, as always, your feedback and comments are highly appreciated :)

[Islam Y.Omari]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0gb3rhHMIQ4&t=9s

[Neil Ravenscroft]

I really enjoyed listening to this, some great ideas.

[Islam Y.Omari]

Thank you so much for the kind words :) I am really glad you enjoyed it.

Neil Ravenscroft said:

I really enjoyed listening to this, some great ideas.

[Gav Brown]

Hi Islam,

A pretty tune along the lines of other things I have seen you post. The ending feels rather abrupt, I had not so much a sense of you building towards it, it just seemed like the piece stopped. I think your music has commercial potential. Thanks for posting!

Gav

[Islam Y.Omari]

Thank you Gave for your kind comment. I see your point, good catch; I was making build ups just similar to waves formations and the way they build themselves gradually; I wanted it to stop that way because also waves stop at shores suddenly, and their build ups also freezes. On the other hand, I think also because I have been working so long on this piece, my ear got used to it the way it is :)

Thank you Gav, your comments never fail to be very observant and helpful :)

Gav Brown said:

Hi Islam,

A pretty tune along the lines of other things I have seen you post. The ending feels rather abrupt, I had not so much a sense of you building towards it, it just seemed like the piece stopped. I think your music has commercial potential. Thanks for posting!

Gav