Music Composers Unite!
Might I suggest you clarify your scores a little Saul? There are many engraving issues such aas notation collissions, redundant rests, ties in the wrong direction, stems in the wrong direction. i noticed you have two notes beamed over an inserted bass clef which lasts for a single note before returning to treble the purpose of which is beyond me! I assume that your notation software assumes greater voices per stave then you are using hence the great many rests or perhaps you played this in live and didn't fix the softwaeere interpretation? but if you produce a score it may as well be accurate if others are to see it.