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About six months ago, i posted something similar to this as "untitled Wind ensemble piece". I decided to axe certain aspects of the piece and have gotten back to writing it.

Please criticize as harshly as you feel led!

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hallo I ve seen only the pdf ...is better then midi files !!!  :)

I only think the "orchestration" is not interesting, and some time blear, for example the flute in mid-low register (in measure 21 also in measure 3...in 3 the others sound pp then flutes maybe need a mp or traspose an 8va up). the "raddoppi" are all to 8va or unisono...the idea is good. I think that if u work on "orchestration" it's became a very good piece!

 

it's only my opinion! 

Thanks Marco! will take your advice into consideration, and if you have anything else i'd be glad to hear it!

nothing else I m only exciting to listen to your future version! 

 

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