So, at the urging of someone on this forum (ahem... Dankk), I thought I'd post my piece "Switched Tickets" for dissection. This piece actually started out as a sketch years back, sequenced in Fruity Loops. I dug up the FL project file earlier this year, exported it as midi, threw it into Cubase and started moving things around and adding layers.
Look forward to hearing suggestions on what could be changed or added to improve this piece. There are so many incredibly talented composers on this forum, I can't help but get better with your input!