Splitsound Suite I I love the intro. the rhythmic motif you use is fun. I also enjoy the textures that kinda fade in and out. its kinda like sailing down a river or moving through a normally crowded street early in the morning and seeing things moving past you.
the pizzicato strings really set off the "walking" feel.
I cant really think of anything to tell you that you could do to it musically, technically, or anyotherly.
Splitsound Suite II and III I like the moving percussive sounds in this part. it is more of a percussive rhythmic variation than melodic variation which is fun. I keep wanting to see this playing over a film of some sort.
after hearing both parts all I really think it could use is perhaps a bit stronger melody. perhaps not in the whole but at least in part. perhaps a solo line weaving in and out on top of what you composed . It would be very easy to make such a line to much though. all 'n all I enjoyed listening to this.
ohhh I enjoy the added melody the little hints of it at least from the vibes and how you have taken that motif and rework it subtly around the score.
for a second there I thought I heard woodwinds but it was the strings.. I like how your trudging through streets has become a bit busier like the more traffic is coming out.