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Hello everyone,

Here is another melody, called "Songe d'hiver" ("winter dream" in english). Can you give me your feedback please ? All critics are welcome, positive or negative.

Thx,

G. 

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Nice melodies, makes it worth listening to

I think a more conventional ending would work better. Perhaps leave the last unresolved cord hanging a moment in the air, then put in a final resolving chord? Otherwise quite nice.

Jostein : thanks for your encouragement.

Michael : thanks for your reaction. Can you please describe why you don't like the "open" ending ?

Probably just me, I like the  closure of a traditional resolution, but there are always exceptions. I just thought that this piece needed it. 

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