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I think a more conventional ending would work better. Perhaps leave the last unresolved cord hanging a moment in the air, then put in a final resolving chord? Otherwise quite nice.
Jostein : thanks for your encouragement.
Michael : thanks for your reaction. Can you please describe why you don't like the "open" ending ?
Probably just me, I like the closure of a traditional resolution, but there are always exceptions. I just thought that this piece needed it.