Music Composers Unite!
After posting part one of this piece on SoundCloud I have gotten some good advice from Peter and Kurt from Philadelphia and Warren from the Juilliard School whom I have known for 35 years. Hope you were able to get on this site. It took me a while.
Concert pianists Makito, Justin, Andre and Mary, Thank You for you hints on harmonic tricks to brighten up the parts needed. I also created a more pronounced and colorful piano middle part after playing it 30 to 40 times and producing a more pronounced message.
As always I very much appreciate advice from players and conductors in the business who know their business.
I did take the advice of Socrates from this site and removed a section of quavers that sounded redundant.
The final product will be done soon after I get the right advice on it's completion.
Here is the link