New Underscore Composition for Film

[Jeremiah Edward]

Hello all,

So, I have gotten some great advice from this forum on my first post.  I'm taking the advice given and going for a smaller sound in my compositions.

This one starts out slow and mysterious... then picks up with xylophone and staccato woodwind. I was trying to recreate the sound I hear on various shows out there today. People sneaking around and that sort of thing. Let me know if I've gotten close to that feel at all....

Thanks!

Jeremiah Edward

[Omar Benmegdoul]

Good work, you got the feeling across very well. I don't think the guitar is appropriate, though, and that's it's played a little too loosely. I would keep the same lines and change the instrument. I would also lengthen the piece; you have room to add a quieter section, and then repeat the xylophone/staccato woodwinds theme with more assertion.