New piece- looking for some constructive feedback. :)

[Garrett Beelow]

I'm really happy with how this came out, but I'd like the opinion of some more experienced composers. Please let me know what you think of the mastering, composition, etc. :)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ROTgeAsPXkc

Thanks!

[Spiros Makris]

I like it! Got to say though that some of your string samples sound a bit "fake". Maybe some more variations mood creation in terms of harmony would be good

[Matthew Whiteside]

It sounds like the introduction to a song or the sketch of the instrumental parts to a song. I was expecting a Corry Tailor in stone sour guise voice coming in at some point. Maybe a way to take it to develop it a bit more.

[Janet Spangenberg]

This sounds like it would make great video game music.

[Vlad Burlea]

Good work! I try to find something wrong in composition but congratulation -nothing .All sound good only its to short. Develop the orchestra and sounds in part like*middle*(next of this part) and come back to this part, like *reprisa*.
Vlad