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I often write program pieces, but this one is abstract. So I gave an abstract name to it first, later adding a program name "Anaerobic".

Big thanks to Irina Kazanskaya for playing piano part for this recording. I am very glad that we had a chance to work together and I understood how a musician perceives this piece. We discussed the piece several times and I recomposed several sections, which sounded strange and were more difficult to perform. This was a beautiful experimental feeling.

I recorded several videos for this track in Moscow using Canon EOS 750D + EF 200mm f/2.8.

The piece consists of three parts. First and third parts are more rhythmic, ostinato. The second part is more light, minimal. The third part connects motives from first and second part together.

I started composing piece with drawing a graph of viola melody and piano of the first part. I was not thinking about the number of parts and their characteristics, until I composed the whole first part. I wanted to make first part all-sufficient and only then create the whole piece from it. Only after writing the first part I selected several keywords for each part and wrote them on the graph.

So, the first part was created in information vacuum and was more dependent on my intuition and ear than on rules. First I wrote the main melody for viola in 14-18 measures by singing it to mobile phone sound recorder (then it did not have additional C and G notes that created intervals). The idea of the melody was that the same note was sounding and gradually more notes were added. Then my critical thinking posed a question: "is it too tonal?" I played a different variant on piano, which now is viola melody in measures 10-13. I was looking to replace first melody with this one. Then I found out that they can live together and added only one linking note at the end of measure 13. I added accents to create a rhythm, that was independent from melody.

Then I added slowing down introduction on one note (m1-m9). When I was writing introduction, I imagined how musician goes on stage and begins playing. I wanted listener to prepare to the next section: I give slow rhythm first, then fast rhythm using one note.

I was not thinking about meter when I was writing this.  Actually, I was glad to find out that this intuitive melody finished on the second quaver of m23. Next melody began on the second beat, shifting meter.

In m23-m25 I continued viola line. After analyzing this section later, I decided to repeat m14-m17 with little changes and prolong transition from viola to piano (m25-26). Changes were little: for example, first quaver in m14 was shifted forward to avoid simultaneous change of tonality and adding new instrument (piano). Also, I avoided changes that would make repeated melody to be completed (affirmative, finishing with tonic), because there was no important change after the repeat.

Then I started to work on the piano accompaniment in m14-25. My idea was to gradually add piano sounds and them pass melody from viola to piano completely. That is why piano plays little notes in the beginning, in m23-25 density increases and in m26 there are no pauses any more. Piano here uses mainly the same notes as viola in m10-17. Piano has its own melody - I wrote it in counterpoint style to create melodic accents where viola does not have melodic or dynamic accents. So, these three accents form a dense network of independent accents, which sometimes overlap - and as a result initial uniform rhythm comes to life.

Later I created piano melody (m27-55), which actually repeats and develops viola melody. It ignores meter as initial melody, but sometimes syncs with it.

Then I layered slow dissonant viola melody above this piano melody. As in other places, I tried to place viola note changes where there were no accents in piano (in counterpoint style), increasing coherence. Melody was initially created in Sibelius.

After that I started to add color by adding double stops in viola and piano. These double stops formed another layer of accents, which again was out of sync with existing layers of accents (melodic, dynamic). For viola I used only double stops with one open string to make performance easier. This approach creates effect of two violas, one of which playing only open strings.

When adding intervals in piano I tried to choose notes that do not appear around (Schoenberg atonal dodecaphony approach, which allows to vary sound spectrum of the uniform rhythm). Piano plays in low register and small intervals (2nds, 3rds) sound similarly dissonant. I used percussion principles: similar intervals create their own rhythms by repeating. For example, starting from m27, interval C-Eb forms its own rhythm. This adds one more rhythm to the network of accents, discussed above. When possible, I favored dissonant intervals, because they made sound richer.

After all this, initially simple monophonic piano part was made complex and interesting.

Then I started to work on the second part. Its idea is using overlapping minimal melodies, independent from the previous melodies. Only at the end of the second part some elements of the first part reappear - doubling melody with single note.

Second part starts with a simple melody, that I sang to my recorder. Later melody is repeated and additional notes are added horizontally and vertically: filling pauses, overlapping melodies and forming intervals and rhythmic accents. Only notes of G major are used in second part, except for three noted D-Eb.

The third part brings melodies of first and second part together. First a transformed melody of second part appears in m99. Then it repeats several times, becoming more and more similar to original melody of the second part.

In m112-113 there is a crossfade between viola and piano.Viola starts to play melodies resembling the second part. Gradually tension increases by moving piano melody up and increase of dissonance in viola. In m125-126 there is a parody of culmination with one note H, which is prolonged and then C note is added, making it broken. The parody of the culmination derives from its absolute consonance and transparence (octaves only), which contrasts with previous texture. Before culmination viola and piano lines become parallel, which intensifies movement into culmination.


Then C note remains alone. Dissonance in culmination and left note signify that it is not the end of the track yet. Several piano melodies derived from second part melodies sound over the C note in viola. They sound detached due to dissonance with viola notes.

During the course of the piece melodies from the second part sound with different character: clean and open in second part, tense at the beginning of the third part and detached at the end of the third part.

The higher the dynamics of the note, the less low frequencies are pronounced. Until I finished the piece, I did not rise dynamics abouve mp and only sometimes lowered it below. This allowed me to always keep the level of dynamics, where pitch is distinguishable and rich in the whole pitch range. This allowed me to hear the interaction between the notes better, without them suppressing each other. This was especially true with staccato notes. They already sound not very melodic due to there length.

After finishing the piece I started to place dynamics indications. Dynamics was flat until m27. Then viola starts to play short phrases. I used a common approach to increase the expressiveness of the phrases - starting phrase with cresc and ending with dim. To stress the dynamics changes and hide the constant rhythm of piano, I gave piano dynamics, opposite to viola. The same for m116-118.

In m120-132 I synced dynamic changes for more transparancy.

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This was really nice. I also appreciate your taking the time to explain your process (I admit I didn't read the whole thing, but I think this kind of thing can be very useful for other composers to learn from.) Intuitively, I think the piece flows very well and the pitch choices (in both the outer sections and the more diatonic middle section) work very well.

My only criticism is that the constant 8th-note idea has a tension that never seems to be fully actualized... i.e. the change at m. 128 felt a little premature, and I wanted to hear some kind of culmination of the 8th-note idea before you dropped it (this could be done by giving the motive to both piano and viola simultaneously, having them rapidly pass it back and forth, expanding it into new ranges of the piano, or something else).

The piece's sense of tension is already good, but I think you could make it even better by exploring different registers (especially in the piano) and sometimes shaping your melodic lines more to move toward/away from important high and low points.

Really unique, well-crafted piece. Good work!

Nicholas, thank you for you reply. This is a very interesting idea of 8th-note idea culmination. Actually, this idea becomes more unresolved, vague in this piece, which adds to the atmosphere of the piece. I both like it and understand, that listener may feel confused by this. Also, melodic lines, which not always tend to move toward some points, add to this unresolved, vague atmosphere.

And now we come to a question, if we want to create a new experience for listeners or let them stay in their comfort zone with more traditional expectations. Do you think this unresolved atmosphere can be of any interest to a listener?

P.S. Also, upper piano register seems unexplored in the piece, I agree that I could make use of it.

Hi Alexey - I think this unresolved atmosphere can indeed be of interest to the listener. And I think music can (and sometimes should) be unsettling to the listener. In this case, though, I was left a little unsatisfied (rather than unsettled... I think this is an important distinction to make).

In general, I think the best unresolved endings (in music or in stories) still happen after some kind of new development or escalation (which doesn't have to be big or climactic... just something that casts the preceding material in a new light.) In that sense, I think my issue with the 3rd section of this piece might be the lack of development of the 8th note idea (rather than the lack of "culmination," per se). Since you don't do anything new with it in the 3rd section, it almost seems to be brought back without a reason, if that makes sense. But that's just my subjective interpretation (or maybe that's exactly the point, and I'm still missing it!)

In any case, I appreciate your thoughtful comments (and your thought-provoking composition!)

Yes, this is an interesting question where two stop between the indeterminacy/randomness and usual music rules.

Alexey,

I listened to the piece several times, but I haven't read your text (to avoid it influencing my listening experience).  Though I intend on reading the text at some later time.

This is one of the most interesting pieces to me that I've heard in the forum. 

I related to the first part immediately, and it speaks to me very strongly.  I listened to it over and over.  One thing that struck me very strongly is that the viola feels like the voice of an animal.  And in fact throughout that first part, I had the feeling of being in the presence of this animal.  I loved the sequence of "events" throughout that 1st part, and the way it reaches that "bang" of the piano in measure 58 (@ 2:00 minutes).

The 2nd part felt coherent with the 1st only in some musical sense, but not in spirit.  The feeling of animal presence went away.  It didn't capture my imagination, it felt a bit like a neutral part without much life in it.  (The video that accompanied it, with the snowfall, did capture my imagination a little bit, though.)

The interest to me picked up again in the 3rd part @ 3:30 minutes, or so.  But not as strongly as the 1st part, of which it was somewhat reminiscent.

Was that you playing the viola?  What a fantastic job!  Also the piano playing was just right for the piece, I thought.

I don't know... I'm wavering a bit about the 2nd part... I do love it.  Maybe it just took it more listens before it reached me (compared to the 1st part).  And I very much love the way the 2nd part ends, which feels rather special.

Mariza, thanks for your inspiring words.

I see that from the listener's point of view the third part brings not much new. It is not the way it was conceived.

I think, contrast between parts 1 and 2 can be too strong and unexpected compared to the piece length.

I used a new Sample modeling Viola library, that was just released. I am proud of the fact that you thought it was a real viola playing, because I tried to tune it to sound more realistic.

Are you serious? The viola wasn't a live instrument?

I feel like I should resign from commenting on people's pieces, really. I don't have enough experience with music, no matter how you look at it.

Alexey Arkhipenko said:

Mariza, thanks for your inspiring words.

I see that from the listener's point of view the third part brings not much new. It is not the way it was conceived.

I think, contrast between parts 1 and 2 can be too strong and unexpected compared to the piece length.

I used a new Sample modeling Viola library, that was just released. I am proud of the fact that you thought it was a real viola playing, because I tried to tune it to sound more realistic.

Mariza, this is ok. I was recently told a story about a real professional clarinettist, who thought that virtual clarinet was real. Actually, this is one of the best solo string library on the market. It takes a lot of work to make it sound realistic, because there are many parameters you can change, but this is what I really like to do.

Actually, I created several video tutorials on using Sample modeling and other virtual instruments http://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLG5rytSM-dR8wsKPHgtBI6rnWaEwH...

Alexey, i enjoyed listening to your piece… The only part i didn't quite get was the middle section where there is the echoing of c d and g (?) … it seemed to not go with the context, or that the change was too radical… but maybe that is just me.

Thank you for posting!

I like a lot your sonata and the creative process. Thanks a lot for your detailed explanations!

Thanks for you comments!

Gregorio, I also start to feel that my use of contrasts often gives result that was originally not planned. Actually, this contrast between the first and the second parts was created intuitively. I need to think more about it and maybe increase or decrease the "radicalism" of changes to make the contrast fit the whole piece.

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