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Please tell me what you think. Also, I don't have any licensing because it's so short.

How could I make this better? Also, please note I made this with Finale Notepad, because I'm cheap :). So I had to record with a microphone from my speakers, so quality is bad. I also edited with Audacity to add fade ins/outs.

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Hey, I think you have a good start, but the song just isn't finished yet, to me. What would help the piece is a clearer melody. You do have a melody , but it is quit repetetive and it looks a lot like the accompagnement. So if you would make the melody more 'standalone' I think the piece would benefit from it.

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