My music experiment

[Ann Rodela]

I am a newly hatched composer and posting this short piece of music I made with Finale software.

Any thoughts? 

[Ann Rodela]

I heard your version. Nice build up! Wow!  :)
 
Gordon Francis Blaney Jr. said:

I thought I'd take ideas in your original composition and compose a quasi-original work. I hope this work gives you food for thought. Feel free to write back to me.

[Gordon Francis Blaney Jr.]

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Ann Rodela said:

I heard your version. Nice build up! Wow!  :)
 
Gordon Francis Blaney Jr. said:

I thought I'd take ideas in your original composition and compose a quasi-original work. I hope this work gives you food for thought. Feel free to write back to me.