is this any better?

[marv cripps]

I tried running my midi through soft synths. Any feedback would be great.

[marv cripps]

Thanks Ray,

I got Sonar Home Studio 7 and don't know how to use it yet. Soft Synths are new to me and I'm probably trying to go too fast - driving in the dark. I will take a good hard look at that phrasing - again thanks.

[marv cripps]

Thank you for all your input. I think I might need some brain enhancment though. I get too anxious to make it all the way through my tutorials. Thanks again for your advise.

[Leon]

I kinda missed the first part of this thread, but I just want to say I liked the track. I think it would sound good through some real guitars. The melody would sound nice on a bass.

[marv cripps]

Thanks, Leon
A positive comment is always welcome