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[Kyai Fadillah]

Hi,

My name is Kyai Fadillah, I'm new to this forum and the main reason I joined was to get some serious critisism from professional composers. I consider myself a amateur in this field so any advice and/or recommendation would help since I'm sending this in for my allowance to the Dutch School of Arts in Utrecht.

I'm looking for critisism that can help me become better as a composer. I don't have the experience, knowledge and sofistication of a proffesional, that's why I came here, to learn.

Heres the link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uJM8OUtF99Q

Don't bother the video attached, it was a quicky.

Enjoy!

[Lara Poe]

Very nice!  I think the audio and video go together very well, and I like the effort you clearly put into syncing them.  

[Kyai Fadillah]

thanks! very much appreciated (:

Lara Poe said:

Very nice!  I think the audio and video go together very well, and I like the effort you clearly put into syncing them.