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I love bach and this is my homage to him. Instead of trying to imitate his gorgeous fluid counterpoint, I went ahead and put my own spin on it by allowing the other voices (mostly found in the left hand) to shine and intrude as percussive "sound effects". I call it Endlessly Partita
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While dissonance is very effective, the constant repeating of the same dissonance can become a little tiresome. there are definitely good ideas here Oscar; I think you just need more contrast to give the listener some relief from that insistent dissonance. Perhaps a modulation?