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My new composition, when I Started writing this, I dont have idea for what it is.. I writing this just for fun.

After finished I think its good for trailer film or Tv programs :D..

Comented welcome :)

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Thanks

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@Bob Hi Bob

Thanks for commented.. 

Until now i finished nearly 30 music.. but i never make more than 4-5 minutes music..

I still training and learning, and i hope next time i can make a longer pieces music..

thanks

Fun piece, easily fits with a trailer or soundtrack, I can personally see this working in a lot of video game music so you could think about contacting some indie video game makers and seeing if they want to use your music.

I think the orchestration could do with some more variety in instrumentation. An orchestra is like a big toy box of different instruments and it's main strength is the different sound combinations and sheer size for things like dynamics, the former being more relevant. This sort of thing is pretty easy to fit in just take your main themes and put them elsewhere in the orchestra, i.e maybe the 2nd time you here the main theme it's on woodwind or brass. You can get a lot of mileage that way and it helps pad out the length of a song if thats something you are struggling with.

You have a nice thing going at the beginning with the added percussion and I'm not suggesting you fill every part of the song with extra instruments. It's a tough balancing act sometimes but if you take a step back from your composition and consider the different options and pick a few to explore it's a lot easier to manage. 

Thanks for sharing

It's Lawrence. Not sure why, he never previously needed an alter ego to talk shite.



Insult Composer said:

This piece needs just one little thing to give it that finishing touch.....a paper shredder.

Is that a bow tie you're wearing, or did your mustache fall down?

what this piece needs is an agent... Barry Manilow step aside...

this is Copland at the Cabana.
 
Insult Composer said:

This piece needs just one little thing to give it that finishing touch.....a paper shredder.

@Alex Hi Alex Thanks for comented and your advice

@Bob @Dave @Roger btw Idont understand what happen in here :p 

A particularly stupid forum member (Lawrence Aurich) adopted a persona under which he then made childish insults on a great many people's work. He then reverted to his previous profile and deleted most of the insults. I am still not sure why.

Galih Setiawan said:

@Alex Hi Alex Thanks for comented and your advice

@Bob @Dave @Roger btw Idont understand what happen in here :p 

Hi Gailh 

No problem, hope you understand I'm just trying to be constructive as this forum is designed for I just feel with text tone is hard to convey, and it's super easy to just say "you can do this and that" and much harder to do. Composition is such a nebulous process. I'll keep a look out for more of your work.

All the best

Alex



Galih Setiawan said:

@Alex Hi Alex Thanks for comented and your advice

@Bob @Dave @Roger btw Idont understand what happen in here :p 

I would try adding some natural-sounding reverb to the piece. It acts as a sort of aural glue and can help a great deal with samples, which I think are still your weak point. Even really good samples, with really good manipulation to create a human-sounding performance, will sound fake without the kind of reverb we're used to hearing in real life - almost no instrument arrives at our ears acoustically dead but your mix creates that impression, making it sound artificial. Check out some live recordings of orchestras in concert halls to see what I mean. Don't overuse it though, I've done that and it's terrible :)

Teg,

     Guess I owe you an explanation.  A few days ago one of my favorite American comedians, Don Rickles died.  He made a career of insulting Hollywood stars.  I took the occasion to do a little tribute to him by putting up his picture and mimicking his shtick.  I think most people got it, but if you are not of a certain age or American you have probably never heard of Don Rickles.  Anyway it was meant in good fun.  

     I enjoyed you piece though I have no idea of your method of composing without a score.  Thanks for posting.
 
Galih Setiawan said:

@Alex Hi Alex Thanks for comented and your advice

@Bob @Dave @Roger btw Idont understand what happen in here :p 

Keep digging.

I liked Chuck Berry rock but I haven't gone looking for sex with children.

You are an idiot and now you apologise for others not knowing your intentions instead of just offering a simple personal apology for your crassness on multiple boards.

Ray
I've heard of Rickles, I just confused your actions with that of a twat

Now there's a REAL insult. and personal attack.

Hardly in the 'spirit' of Rickles though. If you don't get it...

you just don't get it.
 
Ray said:

Keep digging.

I liked Chuck Berry rock but I haven't gone looking for sex with children.

You are an idiot and now you apologise for others not knowing your intentions instead of just offering a simple personal apology for your crassness on multiple boards.

Ray

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