First Orchestral Composition

[Koozi Guy]

Hello,

 I was hoping to get feedback on this:

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jPZysickdOo

 

It was written through-composed/programmatic with lots of quartal harmonies with the aim of experimenting with color and being cinematic. I'm only an undergraduate right now, so any advice would be greatly appreciated.

 

Thank you,

CK

[Jeremiah Edward]

This (in my opinion) is pretty fantastic. It has all the qualities I look for.. It's energetic, powerful, and fun. I think the instruments sound great. All moods you were hoping to express have come across very well. For your first Orchestral piece, this is remarkable.

What happened at the end though? It just sort of stops...

Have you posted this in the Music Dissection forum? You would probably get much more feedback.