Music Composers Unite!
Can you attach the score? It'd be useful if you haven't gone to much trouble with the audio.
interesting concepts here. I rarely comment on peoples compositions since it is subjective unless looking at things like the production. I personally wish there were more things that would turn me on _as_a_performer_. When I write for orchestra, I try and think of the things that make each instrumentalist in the orchestra have fun, difficult passages involving range, rhythm, or fast lines, maybe some inflection 16, 32, 11tuplet type of runs leading to the landing notes. Nobody enjoys playing whole, half, quarter rhythms. And you kind of have to play orchestra section politics in order to get an inspired performance
I like the conceptual tho, I look forward to hearing it played live