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I've never done this before, but I would love to hear what you guys think. Give me the bad more than the good plz....other wise I'll never progress! ;)
Hi, Jeffrey. What can I say? Good work, you have all sections of composition: interesting beginning, good stop at 1"08, middle with good development and the end. All its fine. Only I think the cello sampl is not very good in the upper register and if You can record live cello can be greate, but cello melody line is exactly for cello! Congratulations!
Thanks guys for your thoughts....yes I agree the drums are no good at :48 and 2:30 to busy I would say.
Yes George I'm trying to go for a film scores type sound.
I'm surprised that both of you said the Cello was fake sounding. I though it sounded real, how can I improve that?
This is a nice sounding film score. I liked the guitar samples in particular. The cello could be improved if you're planning to submit this music - to make it less mechanical and more realsitic.
As a piece of film music it works perfectly well. If we were to listen to the music purely for its own terms, then what's missing is development and transition and key change. But since film music often just requires a "mood" to be evoked or underscored, then it's fine to use the same four chords and add variations to the music, rather than employ classical techniques the ones mentioned above.