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Sounds like someone feeling sorry for themselves because they are going to murder someone.
Sounds like a Cello Sonata to me, Joe. Similar to Elgar's Elegy for Cello in mood. I like your style. While slow and deliberate and perhaps too restrained, you do a nice job of contrasting the two instruments. It was a bit loud though, especially the cello at times. But I'm sure this is just a first approximation and you'll fix that stuff.
Hey Joe, where ya going with that gun in your hand ?
This ,I thought , was very good and touching/moving in
in a broodish kind of way. Well done.
I did have a problem with that 1 'step' note at 2:01.
I think it disrupted the mood. Food for thought RS
Sorry for taking ages to reply, been a busy week...
Thank you all for your comments the whole piece is still taking shape and I have taken into account all that has been said.
Thanks for listening,