"Burning Jetfuel" - mixing

[Tapsa Kuusniemi]

Hey guys and gals!

 

I posted a track called the "The New Dawn" here a few weeks back with question about the mixing. With the feedback I got from here and Cakewalk's forum in mind  I mixed this track: "Burning Jetfuel". How does it sound to your ears?

 

http://soundcloud.com/reveltone-co/burning-jetfuel

[James G. Watson]

This is just a preliminary response, as I've only listened to it on small speakers, but generally is sounds well mixed. This guitar/plucked instrument seemed a bit to high in the mix from about 1:00 to 1:12 and from 2:00 to 2:15. All the other instruments appear to be in balance, but I'll give it a listen later on better speakers. Nice piece, by the way.