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Hi everyone!

I'm new here and this is my first composition which doesn't have a name so I just call it '1'.

Please give advice to this noob so he can improve! :)

https://soundcloud.com/win-2-1/1-1

Thanks! 

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very interesting, and surprisingly complex for a first composition. Very nice, and keep it up!

Hi Edwin , I suggest that you go out and buy a good pair of sunglasses-  your future looks bright :-)  RS

Well done!  I listened through twice and the piece held my attention throughout.  You did an excellent job of varying the mood and voicing.  The best advice I can offer is to keep composing!  Challenge yourself and try writing for different instruments and types & sizes of ensembles. 

nice line, gonna file that one away for use. 

roger stancill said:

Hi Edwin , I suggest that you go out and buy a good pair of sunglasses-  your future looks bright :-)  RS

Very true. The single biggest factor of improvement for me has been to keep churning out tracks. You learn something each time.

T.T. Gaudynski said:

Well done!  I listened through twice and the piece held my attention throughout.  You did an excellent job of varying the mood and voicing.  The best advice I can offer is to keep composing!  Challenge yourself and try writing for different instruments and types & sizes of ensembles. 

Natanel, that line was borrowed from a tune by a group called Timbuck 3(spelling?)

it's 'pop' cutsy , but worth a listen... most likely on You Tube (My Futures So Bright- I gotta wear shades)  RS

Natanel Arnson said:

nice line, gonna file that one away for use. 

roger stancill said:

Hi Edwin , I suggest that you go out and buy a good pair of sunglasses-  your future looks bright :-)  RS


This line is so nice that i will translate it into Chinese for my daily usage :)

roger stancill said:

Natanel, that line was borrowed from a tune by a group called Timbuck 3(spelling?)

it's 'pop' cutsy , but worth a listen... most likely on You Tube (My Futures So Bright- I gotta wear shades)  RS

Natanel Arnson said:

nice line, gonna file that one away for use. 

roger stancill said:

Hi Edwin , I suggest that you go out and buy a good pair of sunglasses-  your future looks bright :-)  RS

Thanks Natanel, Roger and Gaudynski for your kind comments :D

It is a wonderful to receive such nice compliments for my first attempt!

Will keep on challenging myself, hopefully post something up here again soon!

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