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I literally cried when writing this. I've become such a different person. Thanks for all who listen, hope you find a little of you in there

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Nice as an ambient piece.

When it faded down a little toward 2'00 I was expecting something different but it was in the same vein as the opening. Similarly at 3'20" it seemed to get static but with nothing to keep the flow going. The return of the drumming at 4'20 was welcome. Ending: It really needed the melodic element that stopped at 5'48" to continue through the fade-out. Just that prolonged chord hinted that a shorter fade-out would be enough, otherwise there's nothing to give anticipation to "the end."

Nice though. A relaxing listen. Thank you.

Cheers, Dane.

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