2nd Piano Composition - Twilight

[Adeel Jafree]

Hey, 

Just recently have gotten into composing music as a hobby and really enjoy it! This is my second composition 'Twilight', consisting only of piano. I got inspiration from music from the 'Nier' franchise - which I tried to reflect through the more intense minor section of the piece (which is further developed in the end of the piece). Would love to hear your thoughts/criticisms. 

Thanks

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=efHNLxb7-PM

[Lawrence Aurich]

Nice job.  I liked the jazz style at the beginning and end.  Some of the abrupt stops and changes in style would come off better if there was a more gradual transition.  I wanted to hear the arpeggios in the right hand which was often drowned out by the bass.  Keep up the good work.